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Sunday, December 28, 2008

space wars 1(sal's veirson)

space wars e-book one:gunked! by:Sal




characters: the good guys: Commander Dack, Captain Danny , Marsh Thomson, the pilot Thomas and co-pilot Carson. the bad guys: gunk monsters(I got that from webkinz world), gila monsters(they stand on two feet), the leader slander, and his favorite helper sanry.space ships:good: the Loon, E-wings, O-wings, and the Dolf. bad: blie(pronounced bly)wing, blie advanced, runn destroyers, and meoae(pronounced mEOA)fighter.














chapter 1:gilas have entered the loon. gilas...................














shrooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooom. The loon rocketed toward the base. Thomas just got back from a space ship battle. The loon needed repairs on the engine thrusters. marsh said he had a new engine and could help fix the loon. BOOOOOM!!!!!! The loon shook violently. Thomas looked on the ship radar system. A blie fighter was following him, and shot at him! He turned the loon around and started firing the laser guns. BOOOOOM!!!!!!!! Suddenly the loon shook violently again! another blie fighter was firing at him! Then the warning signal appeared! The landing gear on the loon had been damaged. He had to make an emergency landing,fast! The nearest planet was laril. It's atmosphere was dirty and from space it looked lime green with barf green swirly clouds around. It was a rough landing and Thomas fell out of his seat. GLOP!!!!!!! He had landed in a swamp, and was sinking! gila monsters were surrounding the loon!!!!!!!! the emergency alarm sounded. "gilas have entered the loon! gilas............." "OH NO!!!" screamed Thomas. " They've broken in!!!" Thomas had no choice but to fight the 40 gilas. boom. boom.BOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One gila had a bazooka!! Thomas got hit and fell to the floor,unconscious! Thomas was takin away to Slander. "Take him to the tortour chamber!!"said Slander.

END OF CHAPTER.

















2 comments:

Sal said...

next chapter comeing soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sal said...

I Love your imagination...great chapter. I wonder what will happen to him in the torture chamber??
Love you,
Mom